Monday, May 01, 2006

The Visit.....











The things you don't show
The things you will never tell
The things you keep so well hidden
I know them.

The things you let go
The smallest details you forget about
The trail you leave behind
They carry your small secrets


You may feel you are the only one to know
You may think nothing is lost
But as soon as you let go

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It's gone

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

don't know what should i be saying!
any regrets???
anything like that?

Viks said...

WOW Benz, that's nicely written. Amazing!

Anonymous said...

indeed its very well written...i always love those writings where there's a flow...feelings & sentiments are expressed in a certain sequence...i love this art...i can't write like this therefore i adore it:)

FM said...

whats the relationship b/w girls and poems?

with regards
fM

Mr. Khurram said...

Such deep words with open yolls, perhaps the chick is gone, LOL!

God bless you....

benz said...
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benz said...

An illusion:-No, NO Regrets.... U learn something now n then from your daily walk of life... There is always a mystery behind the mystery.... :)
i therefore,Judge, no one...

Viks:- Well , it's an inspiration :)

FM;_ the relation between poems n girls are like roses with thonrs... :)i tried my level best to do the justification , did i ?

Champ:- Laugh-Out-Loud.....
If silence was that powerful ......*sigh*

we would have not needed the contemplation of words to describe actually ACTION SPEAKS LOUDER THAN WORDS...

yet , we all r somewhere stuck between the silence and words... some think they are nothing but the empty vessels n they mean nothing.... n silence speaks louder than words... but , to tell u the fact , we all would not be here writing down our mood swings, we wont be pening down our confessions , regrets, thoughts , dreams, bitter realities, wild fantasies etc...i have come up to the conclusion why we are afraid of expressing our feelings to people and not while writing down ... one answer, it's is cause paper has more patience than people...
:)

hey, i can write a post on that :) yes, indeed, i will ....very soon :)

benz said...
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benz said...

champ:- not the chick but the chicken.....

Saad said...

ahem!..quite impressive!

y is it like every1 visits ur blog n no1 sees mine!

:0(

Mr. Khurram said...

Sure, not the chick? LOL!

Dear! I need your opinion about somethin' in my blog. Do check it. *Smiles*

God bless you....

benz said...

saad:- i m sorry, i have no clue.. nut will ask ppl to visit ur blog too....

Champ..:_ brother, sure i will....

Saad said...

lolz!

benz said...

saad:- what is so funny abt it....?

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