Friday, November 25, 2005

In Between The Lines....


There's nothing funny left to say.No water running in the stream.Everything I touched was golden.Everything I loved got broken.I like to sleep beneath the trees.Have the universe at one with me.Look down the barrel of a gun.And feel the Moon replace the Sun.Everything we've ever stolen.Has been lost returned or broken.No more dragons left to slay.Every mistake I've ever made.Has been rehashed and then replayed.As I got lost along the way.

No more Silence NOW.....

LIke a dream i cannot explain .TIme will show me how..Suddnely everything has turned me inside out. it was a crazy thing... Sudeenly someones comes and togetther you sing a song and music is all that take control.But i am left all alone in between the lines...

Save me...

Sve me from drowning....

30 comments:

Anonymous said...

hmmmm....quite interesting..full of emotions and very true...but i didnt get one thing....WHO WAS THERE WITH U FOR THE TEMPORARY PERIOD!!!!....lol...anyways it was really very nice and a lovely post...as if the brain speaks!!!

Saad said...

After falling off a steamship or being swept away
in a rush of floodwaters, wouldn't you hope
for a more leisurely review, an invisible hand
turning the pages of an album of photographs-
you up on a pony or blowing out candles in a conic hat.

Anonymous said...

very intensely written with deep thoughts realting to what we experience in life which can be uncertain at times ..it's amazin to see how people mark their thoughts and insights in words..simply remarable..n this stuff is one creative piece ive read ever...keep it up..!(Y)

Anonymous said...

congratulations, welcome to the real world. the child becomes a woman.

Sadaff said...

i have been speechless for a while now
i read this
dont know what to say.

if i say, i see a metamorphosis, am i wrong?

meshwork said...

bina kiya hua.. wht happened.. ??
i hope it hasnt happened once again... bina we need to talk...!!!!!

Anonymous said...

anonymous was the best....really...its abt maturity..and a bit sense of humour awaits...:P

Anonymous said...

Couldn’t help notice the black and white picture. How BOORING can life get? Lonely and discontented, this girl standing on the edge of a road facing the ground with her hand on her face. Can any one not see the misery she is in? No one around even at the peek hour of the day. The sun rising, her shadow growing. Standing there alone in between the lines, thoughts wandering. Should I cross it or should I not? Waiting for someone to come and rescue her from this pain she is in. Should she wait? Or step to the fore and face what fate has to offer!!!!!!! WHAT SAY U ?

Anonymous said...

How is this about maturity???? Please someone anyone explain that concept. As I perceive it this is not at all about maturity, it’s about figuring out what life had and will be offering. One can be loaded with numbers and can be as juvenile as that FZ person. What is that twaddle oh I mean comment he/she wrote about conceptualize, predicting, disappointment and things happen when they are bound to happen. How can someone not think and analyze about anything that’s going on in their life. Can a person be that naive? There must be a way, FZ has certainly figured it out ;). By the way how did it go for? Were you able to buy a piece of GUM with it!!!!!!

Mr. Khurram said...

Wow, These Deep words show pure feelings. And if some one 've pure felings, they always get to the Purity.

God bless you...

Mr. Khurram said...

Wow, These Deep words show pure feelings. And if some one 've pure felings, they always get to the Purity.

God bless you...

mahnoor said...

that is one AMAZING post. i'm glad i got to come home to this :)

"Everything I touched was golden. Everything I loved got broken." so good.

this is robbie williams if i'm not mistaken, right? he's soooo good.

Anonymous said...

Mahnoor, nice hat but wheres the broomstick?

mahnoor said...

somewhere around the quidditch pitch i believe, i don't really clean up after myself ;)

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Anonymous said...

dear anonymous! let the miserable girl go as she has been lookin' for her 50 pence coin she dropped past night on the very same walk-way, erm.. stupid though. they lay bricks around a walk-way to make it _look_ like a walk-way (for them who are not blind but cannot see walk-ways properly, lol) and these stupid girls when standing on walk-ways, searching for a 50 p coin in dark and whinning (lol) they feel like in between the lines stupid, aye?

Anonymous said...

can u drive through a walk way? or are the bricks inbetween the lines?

Anonymous said...

if i drive through the drive-through will i get a chicken inbetween a sandwich?

Sana Umer said...

bino sab khair to hai na?

benz said...

Aqsa....some people come in to ur lives and all they leave behind is the footsteps n memories n u r never the same person again .... it doesnt matter if it's for a long period or not :) hehehe btw y shud i tell u ;)

benz said...

saad:- hehehehe , will surely knwo when that not invisible but visible hand turn the pages of an album pf photographs of me on a pony or blowing out cnadles in a conic hat :) okay will surely tell u too :)

benz said...

fz:- No, not with u for sure :) :P
jsut kidding NO offense...
DUnt u dare call my blog a crap.. its like a baby to me.. n no mother can hear abt her babies:P well , thanks alot fz but one cant think leaving wats going around them but yeah to certain time exttent they can leave at the back of their mind... well thanks for the advice .. will surely try to look fwd to it

benz said...

hibah:-i know yari... time doesnt remains the same so does our moods.. it jsut keep swinging.. we are sometimes lsot with the decisions btu than again we leave everything on time to decide ...
:)

benz said...

anonymous:-congratutalions to u too:) i have always been living in this bitter or real world of urs :)

benz said...

aina :- u really wanna know;)

Mehwish;- ehheheh ,,, no im pretty much ok ..... thanks for the concerned :)

Aqsa;- hehehe sense of humour awaits.. hmm :)



Boxing Champ;- hehe i hope wat u say comes out true.. n ppl realise others feelings... :) but they dunt care :P


anonymous...:_ u take a step to a drive way through u might find ur chicken ... lol...

benz said...

aks...yeah everythign is fine.. thanks for the concerned...luv u :)

Viks said...

Nice.

In simple words really:

We are somewhat mingled between what Allah SWT* created and what we ourself created. The sooner we realize which one is more important, the sooner we'll stop living in between the lines

Life's simple, we just make it abstruse

-Viks

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