There’s a silence surrounding me
I can’t seem to think straight
I’ll sit in the corner
No one can bother me
I think I should speak now ___________
I can’t seem to speak now ____________
My words won’t come out right
I’m feeling weak now _________________
But I can’t show my weakness _________
I sometimes wonder ___________________
It doesn’t have to be like this
All we need to do is make sure we keep talking.......................
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Very well written Bina. :) Keep up the good work.
But then... beni...... who knwz where time leads...... and we go wid the flow of river.... ending up nowhere.........
but still we should always try to speak our minds up either by saying it, or by neother oulet of ur thoughts.
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i think this is awesome. afsos. its all too true
too much talking leads u nowhere. believe me, i talk with experience. but then another nice attempt to writing. dont forget what i told you. put words togather in a way to bring the best out of you. let ur writing attract people. let them know that if you have the power to feel and think you also have the power to give them a shape. words give shape. :)
best ov luck,
hey its very cool n very true ,its good to c such a good work all in one place,,,...keep it up,,ruby.
lovely!
True and sort of emotional.....I like the way it is written.....very interesting and attention-grabbing.....sweet..it feels that my mind is speaking.....realistic and lovely.....i agree with what noor says...no one is there to listen the words yet they are very true...keep on writing beautiful words like these...:)
Herrrre we go....beanz,thats what im gona call you from now on..Beanz!!
Beanz has been blogging..a whole lotta bloggin..too much fer my noggin..can't bring words together to comment...she'll kill me if im not postin...whoa i jus realized im rhymin roflmao
i am literally at a loss for words,i thought i'd know wat to write at the right moment,turns out....i don't!but yer blogs are amazing,and i shall make it point to comment more often.....n figure out somthin worthwile to write...and now i see i've bin going on and on and on without making any sense,i shall depart for i am not making any sense.good luck beanz on yer future blogs!!!!
farhan :- i do agree . We dunt know where time leads but it doesnt mean we stop expecting or looking fwd to what life has stored for all of us...
aks:- yes aks we should speak our minds in two of the either ways
Mafaz:- thanks and i did visit ur blog.. its awsome... keep up the gud work...
Dutch:- I am looking fwd to read ur next poems on blog coz u r really gud at it so start blogging...
Gauher:- most of the time v just run out of words....
Auzzie:- i was talking abt not to remain with lost for words but we should keep talking not to be with over talking .. we shud make our selves heared .. and as far as writing is concerned thank alot i will surely look fwd to ur advice ..gud writing or attention grabbing comes when u play with words tht is why we all are here but i must make it clear one thing to you we fine artists lay with our colours on paletter not with words as they say :- "what is the use of painting when we start explaining what we have been painting abt " so to me its gonna take time... :) and u have gotta have patience:)
Ruby :- thanks :)
Moi:- you are doing a gr8 job too:)
Noorie and aqsa :- I do agree there have been many times when i wanted to get heared but there ws no one to listen to and i wanted to be in a crowd but at the same time i didnt want to get noticed .. it happens...
Sunshine... :- Lol i dunt mind u can call me with wat ever names u like ... wat is more important to me is how much u give respectto me give n i thank u very much for eveything...
ragadon:- now i dunt have to .. u already did tht... :) thanks ....
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